Redfae


 
I had a feeling that ending an YA Ubran Fantasy with an element of Romance might get a negative response by not letting the happy couple get together at the end.

After recieving the first run of negative feedback on Drift I realised that the ending was not welcomed by the audience.   The whole story had been a promise of a beautiful romance and then by not delivering at the end, I had short changed my reader like a dodgy builder that doesn't finish the job asked. 

I had a little think about it and then I crafted the ending they all desired and quickly got my feedback turned around to five stars again.